Fix Your SCREENPLAY with my Detailed Script ANALYSIS! in Baltimore, Maryland For Sale
The first ten pages of your screenplay must hook a reader at a production company, agency, or screenwriting competition. If you don't reel them in fast then they're probably going to start skimming or worse--stop reading your script all together.
My analysis can help you see story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. in a new light. I can show you how to avoid common mistakes so the reader can't wait to turn the pages of your script.
The problem with most screenplay analysts is they can't show you how to rewrite your description and dialogue. I'll actually rewrite a bit of description and dialogue here and there to give an example on how it can be improved and set you on the right track. See examples below.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: I did an extremely detailed analysis of a script for a writer and they won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. I spent an hour and a half on their first page alone to help smooth out the kinks. I also analyzed a script for a writer then helped them rewrite the dialogue and they recently acquired one million dollars toward making their film. I did an analysis for a director and helped rewrite the screenplay and that script was recently shot and is in post. And finally, I performed an analysis for a writer who has written movies that have made in the 100s of millions of dollars. He was a comedy writer struggling with the plotting of a hard-boiled thriller and I set him on the right track.
For the last few years I've been writing, rewriting, and analyzing screenplays for writers, actors, directors, and producers. I've read over 3,000 screenplays as a script analyst and for screenwriting contests. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays to date and have sold five. One has been shot and another is going into production this summer. Plus, I have producers shopping several of my scripts around town trying to get them into production.
I charge $250.00 for an extremely comprehensive script analysis. I accept PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis. I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
SAMPLES OF MY SCREENWRITING:
Action Military Scene in Iraq:
https://www.box.com/s/8a458b7bxxxxxxxxab8a
Dramatic Birthday Scene:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxx0fac00d8a8a95a70
Tense Opening During Cold War In Soviet Union:
https://www.box.com/s/21cxxxx32cbxxxxd9f71
High Octane Opening During NASCAR Race:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxxd9bd9b01d25a12be
MORE INFORMATION ABOUT MY WRITING SERVICES:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxxa993cbe0ac7f32b4
REFERENCES AND RESUME:
https://www.box.com/s/3da1e41b255cxxxxd874
MY INTERNET MOVIE DATABASE (IMDB) PAGE:
http://www.imdb.com/name/nmxxxx241/
FORMAT: I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan