Finished a SCREENPLAY? I'll analyze it to show you how to improve it. in Baltimore, Maryland For Sale
Have you written a screenplay and know it needs some work but don't know where to turn for help? I'm a screenwriter in Los Angeles who's sold five screenplays and I offer an in-depth analysis of your screenplay.
I give you an overall analysis, then I lead you through each scene to find what works and what needs improvement through story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. I go way beyond what the others give you. I even rewrite a bit of description or dialogue to give an example on how it can be improved.
I've worked as a reader doing coverage and have read over 3,000 feature-length scripts. For screenwriting contests I've read as many as 10 scripts a day. Talk about brutal! Don't do this, your brain will melt. Plus I've written and rewritten over 30 screenplays. Of the five screenplays I've sold two have been shot and are in post. A couple others I've written for clients are being packaged and we're looking for financing.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: I did an extremely detailed analysis of a script for a writer and they won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. I spent an hour and a half on their first page alone to help smooth out the kinks. I also analyzed a script for a writer then helped them rewrite the dialogue and they recently acquired one million dollars toward making their film. I did an analysis for a director and helped rewrite the screenplay and that script was recently shot and is in post. And finally, I performed an analysis for a writer who has written movies that have made in the 100s of millions of dollars. He was a comedy writer struggling with the plotting of a hard-boiled thriller and I set him on the right track.
I charge $250.00 for an extremely comprehensive script analysis. I accept PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
Why have a person who has never written a screenplay before review your script? On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
SAMPLES OF MY SCREENWRITING:
Action Military Scene in Iraq:
https://www.box.com/s/8a458b7bxxxxxxxxab8a
Dramatic Birthday Scene:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxx0fac00d8a8a95a70
Tense Opening During Cold War In Soviet Union:
https://www.box.com/s/21cxxxx32cbxxxxd9f71
High Octane Opening During NASCAR Race:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxxd9bd9b01d25a12be
MORE INFORMATION ABOUT MY WRITING SERVICES:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxxa993cbe0ac7f32b4
REFERENCES AND RESUME:
https://www.box.com/s/3da1e41b255cxxxxd874
MY INTERNET MOVIE DATABASE (IMDB) PAGE:
http://www.imdb.com/name/nmxxxx241/
FORMAT: I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to improve your screenplay.
Dan